My Island

10/05/03

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Two Stories about an Island

 

MY ISLAND

I am ship shipwrecked, abandoned, and stranded.  I have floated up to an island, I know nothing about and I don't know if I am close to a town or city.  I am scared. What will I do?

This little island looks tropical. It has about twenty palm trees on it. I can find lots of shells everywhere, all different shapes, sizes, and colours. I can see the little fish jumping and flipping around in the sea.

I am almost starting to like this island, but I don't want to live here forever. I hope that a boat will come and find me. At least some other person could get shipwrecked and come and starve with me on the little island. No, that won't happen.

All these questions are passing through my head. Is this real? Am I going to live?

But then all in a shudder a thing comes from the palm forest….a creature. But what is it? Help me! What's going to happen to me I keep asking myself? Then just as the creature tries to pounce on me and eat me all up…POOF

But then all in a shudder a thing comes from the palm forest….a creature. But what is it? Help me! What's going to happen to me I keep asking myself? Then just as the creature tries to pounce on me and eat me all up…POOF

 

I wake up. What a horrible dream. What was that creature? What was that thing? I fall back asleep and the dream continues on. The thing has just pounced into the air and …POOF!

By Ashley

 I wake up again. Only to find my big fat cat named Cocoapuff sitting on my head. I was so afraid of what turned out to be my cat. Oh, what a dream! I hope I never, yes never, have that dream anymore.

MY ISLAND

         My island is in a perfect place with the best weather anyone would wish for.  In the summer, the sun is out beating down on the beach, but there is a light, cool breeze. In the winter, the sun is weaker and there is no snow.  YA!!!!!!!!!! 

 
 

Animals dodge every which way when I find their hiding spot, even though they’re tame.  The blood-thirsty sharks let me swim in the cool refreshing water, but only if I stay out of their WAY! 

The soft, light sand tickles my toes every time my foot collides with the ground.  The trees reach the sky and pierce though the puffy clouds above.  The wind dances though my hair to the soft melody of the waves gently meeting the shore.  It’s a dream of an island.

 
  By Mel  
     
     
 

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